LO4 Script Annotations

Any altered dialogue has been highlighted in yellow. Altered dialogue is words we have changed to make them more colloquial and local to our area. New dialogue has been highlighted in blue, this is to do with the new features that we added to our script.
 
To improve the script, we used Vicky's feedback and changed things in certain ways:

• We used more colloquial language and phrases like "right", "gonna", "way better" and "got rid" so the dialogue seemed more informal and conversational.
• We took out some news stories about gaming technology with a look into "Disney Infinity 3.0" to make the information more relevant, varied and interesting.
• We made the script more appropriate for the remit of Sheffield Live TV because the station exists to serve the local community. Therefore we added some local information
• We needed to also add titles to the features which unfortunately are not on the above script, but we will have each feature with its own description